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Etta Madden's avatar

Thanks so much to Unleash Lit for publishing my essay. And thanks to my siblings for supporting me. Their memories of my father, of course, differ from mine.

Lisa Logan's avatar

Love this work, Etta. Hope to see you again on the road. So courageous!

Etta Madden's avatar

Thank you, Lisa, for your kind comments and encouragement! Your taking the time to read means a lot to me! Yes, we should spend some time journeying together!!!

Anne Boyd's avatar

What a gripping read! All of the imagery of running off, heading over the horizon, driving without seatbelts or GPS, the mixture of exhileration, fear, danger, and violent consequences had me on the edge of my seat.

Etta Madden's avatar

Thank you for the read and the restack, Anne. I'm glad you appreciate the imagery.

Cynthia A's avatar

This essay gripped me (and I held my breath). Dreams provoke so much thought.

Etta Madden's avatar

Thank you for reading, Cynthia! I'm glad to find you here. It's been disappointing to lose connections with friends I was accustomed to seeing on FB. I'm sorry I didn't see your response until today. Hope you are well.

Lucy Hearne Keane's avatar

Loved this essay Etta. So lucid even though it relates to memory and dreams.

Etta Madden's avatar

Thank you, Lucy, for reading and responding. Apologies for not having seen your response until now! I appreciate it.

Victoria Olsen's avatar

This was an amazing piece of writing, Etta. You leave so much space around each man (and vision)— to define themselves, without judgment. That reveals you in strong relief too, in comparison. All three portraits are singular and complex. So well done!

Etta Madden's avatar

Victoria--for some reason I am just now seeing your comment here. I do appreciate so much your reading a couple of days ago and responding with these kinds words.

Victoria Olsen's avatar

Of course— The kind words are also sincere!

Rona Maynard's avatar

A car with no air bags: great analogy for later life. You see the past more clearly as the future blurs and shrinks.

Etta Madden's avatar

Thank you for reading and commenting, Rona. You (and your writing) have really been an inspiration. ❤️

Rona Maynard's avatar

I forgot to add: Thank you for the shoutout, Etta.

Etta Madden's avatar

Of course! Enjoy Spain!